Saturday, November 19, 2005

Sounds

It all seemed so quiet, so tranquil,
Almost unnaturally calm, silence so shrill!
That crowded emptiness, so turbulently still...
That incomplete whole, the voidness of nil!

I waited, then I strained my ear,
Rubbed my eyes and tried to hear,
Familiarity of common sounds near,
That secure feeling without a fear!

I tried to remember where I was,
And where time stood to take a pause;
The last memory came of a sound,
The plaintive cry of a sorrowful hound!

I recollected feeling oddly tense,
U know, dogs have an uncanny sense -
Of telling that a moment is so;
that the chosen one's about to go!

I managed to shrug the feeling off,
Dispelled my fears and tried to scoff;
But a nagging doubt had stayed behind,
For such is the love of kin and kind...

Felt like reaching out to SOMEONE -
Alas! Some things aren't posthumously done!

2 Comments:

At 2:04 AM, Blogger Paresh said...

enjoyed it.

 
At 7:49 PM, Blogger Shankari said...

This hurt!

It reached too deep down in and disturbed me much.

Initially I thought you were referring to the kind of quiet that one experiences when one first moves out of India to a strange place abroad where the silence can be almost a physical thing. But the end of this really knocked me off.

Guess thats the power of your images- great!

 

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